Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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the number of crimes, some

people

believe that lengthening the

punishment

will be the best solution.

However

,

although

this

approach is impactful for a

crime

, other ways may be more effective to eradicate rampant crimes. Given

this

situation, another way

such

as social

punishment

should have been enacted to decrease the number of crimes. To commence

with

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, there are positive and negative consequences

by

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of

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enacting

the

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extended

punishment

for

prisoners

.

Firstly

, In terms of

positive

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the positive

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side, the criminal will have

less

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fewer

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possibilities for doing a

crime

. If the

prisoners

are burdened by

longer

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duration of

penalty

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the penalty

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, they may

spent

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much of their life in cells.

Then

, these

people

might be freed when they are old and there is no time for them to recommit

crime

again.

Nevertheless

, the negative side is that jails will probably not be able to accommodate these

crime

actors at the same time. If they are jailed for a long time, it will disturb jail

regulation

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regulations

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which can impact the jail being full and there will be

not

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no

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available cells for new

prisoners

. Another alternative

such

as

social

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a social

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penalty might give

more

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significant effect. Unlike giving longer sentences

for

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to

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prisoners

, social

punishment

can give a deterrent effect.

For example

, after

people

who commit a

crime

being

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freed, their surroundings will give

a

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social pressure

then

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and then

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make them feel guilty.

Consequently

,

this

way can give a traumatic effect

for

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on

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doing

crime

and effectively reduce the risk of

crime

.

However

,

this

method cannot always work because it depends on

their

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the

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environment

. If the

environment

is good, the social

punishment

will be enforced, but when the

environment

is full of

apatise

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apatite

people

, it might not work

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, an added penalty can decrease

the

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crime

but there is another way

that is

more effective

such

as

punishment

by the

environment

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environmental

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of

criminal

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criminals

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. Given

this

situation, the government should support social

social

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punishment

by showing

prisoners'

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prisoners

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guilty in public and

make

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making

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them

regret

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.