Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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situation we are mostly involved with new automation which to has made easier our task. Some Nobel instruments have reduced mankind's costs and different types of contact media decrease time consumption and smooth endeavour. We are getting lots of help from current technology these are optimising our tension. Our daily life is going to be very rush; we do have not enough space and no available money that will spend on different types of tasks.
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situation we want to try to contact each other in various away;
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of health problems, like obesity, laziness, being inactive and being affected by some kind of mental and physical disorder. it has created a loss of money and time. So, the end of my clarification is that. machinery is helping us by many others away for that reason our daily effort is like a cup of tea and very handy.
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