Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because people can acquire information on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some

people

argue that education centres are not necessary at all because

people

can gain all information by searching on the

internet

. From my point of view, I completely disagree with

this

idea. First of all one of the main reasons for

this

argument, is the importance and value of educational centres like schools and universities . In educational ,places there are a lot of courses that improve

people

's background knowledge. An educated person has a strong view of science, because of all the professional classes that

has

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done before.

Additionally

, someone who acquires information and

data

in a valid place has new ideas. ,

Also

he can present incredible opinions and discover some new ways and methods for issues. Despite all the different kinds of information and

data

on the

internet

, these significant activities cannot be found and performed on the

internet

. Another reason is that

,

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some online reports are inaccurate and they do not have any available resources.

This

is one of the important basis that online

data

can cause some problems rather than being useful for

people

. On the other, some websites are managed by illiterate

people

without any professional education. These can be more harmful

for

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readers.

For example

, different psychological workshops or medical science can be shared by these

people

.

Therefore

, educational

people

attend some valuable classes that all significant subjects

are

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taught by a professional professor.

To conclude

, I fully disagree with

this

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idea that searching on the

internet

and websites should

replaced

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with universities and schools. In my opinion, some encouraging things can happen to persuade

people

for studying at school

instead

of accepting invalid and different

data

on the

internet

.