Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because people can acquire information on the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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argue that education centres are not necessary at all because

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can gain all information by searching on the

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. From my point of view, I completely disagree with

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idea. First of all one of the main reasons for

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argument, is the importance and value of educational centres like schools and universities . In educational ,places there are a lot of courses that improve

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's background knowledge. An educated person has a strong view of science, because of all the professional classes that

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done before.

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, someone who acquires information and

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in a valid place has new ideas. ,

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he can present incredible opinions and discover some new ways and methods for issues. Despite all the different kinds of information and

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on the

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, these significant activities cannot be found and performed on the

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. Another reason is that

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some online reports are inaccurate and they do not have any available resources.

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is one of the important basis that online

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can cause some problems rather than being useful for

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. On the other, some websites are managed by illiterate

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without any professional education. These can be more harmful

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readers.

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, different psychological workshops or medical science can be shared by these

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.

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, educational

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attend some valuable classes that all significant subjects

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taught by a professional professor.

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, I fully disagree with

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idea that searching on the

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and websites should

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with universities and schools. In my opinion, some encouraging things can happen to persuade

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for studying at school

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of accepting invalid and different

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on the

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