Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter - say what you like about the uniform - explain what you don’t you like about the uniform - suggest how the uniform can be improved

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Dear,Sir I am writing to you
this
letter Because our company
uniform
is very good for me. The
uniform
is very fit for me and , when I am wearing feels very good
However
, most people talk to me about
this
. I have used
this
uniform
very much when I am coming to the company. Our company sir is very good people to me ,But relation with me and they are our relatives For, when sir giving to me I feel very happy.And I m writing to you You gave me a
uniform
,
Hence
this
uniform
lasted 2 months run ,But I am telling you
this
cloth is not good ,So change
this
and improve
this
. Yours sincerely Mahasingh
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