It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than benefits to the community and the young adults themselves?

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day and age,

community

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service

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has become an unreplaceable part in -> of our life. It is suggested that every teenager should be forced to take part in volunteer

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to help people in society. From my point of view, the disadvantages have outweighed the advantages and the following essay would help to strengthen my point.

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with,

community

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service

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brings a lot of merits to society,

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as making the sight of the city becomes better, or providing help to people in need. When teenagers attend volunteer

work

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that

help

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the

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, they would learn to contribute their strength to

improving

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the

neighborhood

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, in which they live, in many ways.

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, they could do some errands

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as cleaning the street and

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out the park, or adolescents could attend

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volunteer

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at the home for the aged to help the elderly.

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, they could share and learn a lot from their fellow attendees, or sometimes get some valuable

advices

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-> pieces of advice from the old.

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, doing unpaid

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for the

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sometimes does not bring desirable results, as it can demotivate

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teenagers and can be time-consuming.

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, doing unpaid

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can demoralize the adolescence who participate in the

work

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. When young adults take part in the

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, the idea that they would be rewarded will motivate them and make them

work

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harder. So if they are not getting paid, it will take away all of their spirits and reduce their productivity.

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, many teenagers do not enjoy doing

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that

help

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the

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, as in their perceptive, it appears to be a waste of time.

Community

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service

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comprises many works and errands,

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as cleaning the street and helping the elderly, but in reality, there are workers who are paid to do these works. So, in fact, many adolescents would not bother to take

community

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service

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properly because they think there are people who do those jobs already.

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, many students and young adults are asked to help take care of the elderly in the home for the aged, but there are already nurses with professional knowledge to operate and carry the job, and sometimes help come from young adults would slow them down.

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, doing

community

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work

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that helps society does have its own benefits,

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, the drawback of

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issue is greater, as it can be time-consuming and does not bring the desired results.