An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Sarah, I received your letter yesterday and
glad
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to know about your visit to Karachi. I have
also
decided to apply for my annual leaves when you arrived in Pakistan. Meanwhile, If you have not arranged any
accomodation
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accommodation
yet
then
I can look for a guest house near to my house for you to stay
during
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your vacations. I have already planned many activities that we can do together. We can have breakfast at nearby restaurants and can go
for
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apply
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shopping. We can
also
join
club
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the club
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so that we would have some entertainment to do at night. We can take fortnightly membership of Arena Club where we may enjoy bowling, ice skating, video games, meal, etc. You can take long dresses, jeans and
tshirts
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T-shirts
shirts
t-shirts
with you. I can
also
buy you some good traditional clothes.
Weather
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here is moderate so you don't have to keep
sweater
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sweaters
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or winter
dresses
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in your luggage. I am very happy that I can't wait to see you. Looking to meeting you soon. Warm wishes, Sana Farooq
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