Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today ‘s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is an arguable discussion about which
subjects
should be given the main focus on children
education. Change noun form
children's
On the other hand
, some people believe that history
has to be given more highlight whilst others opine that science
and technology
are far more principal than any other subjects
. I support the latter view.
On the other hand
, their
most citizens have to acknowledge Correct pronoun usage
apply
about
their own country's Change preposition
apply
history
in order to keep them from losing their identity of ethnicity and culture. If major people aren't
interested in this
subject, most of them wouldn't
be willing to fight for their country. Considering dramatically situation, it can result in serious loss during the war. For example
, severe ancient countries lost their own lands since they didn't
have attachment and proud recognization about their own motherland by lacking of
identity.Remove the preposition
apply
Thus
, opponents think history
is the most important among
every Change preposition
of
subjects
.
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subject
Firstly
,although
history
is significant to learn, students who are very talented in science
and technology
subjects
can advance the world. Everything nowadays is developed by science
and technology
. Also
, they contribute to changing everyone's lives comfortably and delightfully. For instance
, incredibly advanced surgeries and medicines enable us to overcome our health problems effortlessly. This
is the reason why I think that science
and technology
should be considered more remarkably than others.
In conclusion, history
shouldn't
be ignored because it reminds us our
own identity about our cultures. Change preposition
of our
However
, science
and technology
should be the most important subjects
in school
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the school
curriculum
deftly so that we can live our lives with better quality.Fix the agreement mistake
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