Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today ‘s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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should be given the main focus on

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education.

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, some people believe that

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has to be given more highlight whilst others opine that

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and

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are far more principal than any other

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. I support the latter view.

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most citizens have to acknowledge

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their own country's

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in order to keep them from losing their identity of ethnicity and culture. If major people aren'

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interested in

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subject, most of them wouldn'

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be willing to fight for their country. Considering dramatically situation, it can result in serious loss during the war.

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, severe ancient countries lost their own lands since they didn'

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have attachment and proud recognization about their own motherland by lacking

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identity.

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, opponents think

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is the most important

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.

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is significant to learn, students who are very talented in

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and

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can advance the world. Everything nowadays is developed by

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and

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.

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, they contribute to changing everyone's lives comfortably and delightfully.

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, incredibly advanced surgeries and medicines enable us to overcome our health problems effortlessly.

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is the reason why I think that

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and

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should be considered more remarkably than others. In conclusion,

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shouldn'

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be ignored because it reminds us

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own identity about our cultures.

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,

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and

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should be the most important

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in

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curriculum

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deftly so that we can live our lives with better quality.