‘All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

It is widely believed that everyone can speak more than one
language
. It can be stated that
children
should require another
language
, apart from their mother tongue as soon as they enter school.
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essay will not agree on why I believe it is important for a child to learn another when they begin school. Primarily, the most common international languages (
in addition
to English, Japanese etc.,) are strongly confusing to
children
.
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elementary school can be unaware about the basics of the course, we should provide only with motivate their basics. If we demonstrate speech, it will
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confound
children
. In the
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kindergarten
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kindergarten
,
for example
, the teachers teach and use English to educate the
children
on
pronounciation
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pronunciation
and accents;
however
, they
also
begin to teach them Mongolian alongside English, so the younger is likely to face difficulties in his studies. In contrast, I agree with those who believe that 
children
 should learn another 
language
 during the  early stages of schooling, because that time should be used to educate the kid about their mo
ther
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the
 tongue or a standard 
language
 that is widely used in daily life as well as in professional setti
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NGS
.
However
,
this
linguistic skill set suggests what they have learnt. To summarize, it appears that middle childhood in educational institutions should be taught primarily in their home country's official
language
as well as
a popular speech in order to strengthen their basics and,
as a result
, should not be confused with another one.
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