‘All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

It is widely believed that everyone can speak more than one
language
. It can be stated that
children
should require another
language
, apart from their mother tongue as soon as they enter school.
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essay will not agree on why I believe it is important for a child to learn another when they begin school. Primarily, the most common international languages (
in addition
to English, Japanese etc.,) are strongly confusing to
children
.
That is
to say, since
children
at the elementary school can be unaware
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the basics of the course, we should provide only
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their basics. If we demonstrate speech, it will,
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confound
children
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kindergarten
,
for example
, the teachers teach and use English to educate the
children
on
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pronunciation
and accents;
however
, they
also
begin to teach them Mongolian alongside English, so the younger is likely to face difficulties in his studies. In contrast, I agree with those who believe that 
children
 should learn another 
language
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 because that time should be used to educate the kid about their 
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 tongue or a standard 
language
 that is widely used in daily life as well as in professional 
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.
However
,
this
linguistic skill set suggests what they have
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. To summarize, it appears that middle childhood in educational institutions should be taught primarily in their home country's official
language
as well as
a popular speech in order to strengthen their basics and,
as a result
, should not be confused with another one.
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