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‘All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

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It is widely believed that everyone can speak more than one
language
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. It can be stated that
children
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 should require another
language
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, apart from their mother tongue as soon as they enter school.
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 essay will not agree on why I believe it is important for a child to learn another when they begin school. Primarily, the most common international languages (
in addition
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 to English, Japanese etc.,) are strongly confusing to
children
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 to say, since
children
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 at the elementary school can be unaware
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 the basics of the course, we should provide only
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 their basics. If we demonstrate speech, it will,
unfortunately
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 confound
children
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kindergarten
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, the teachers teach and use English to educate the
children
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 on
pronounciation
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pronunciation
 and accents;
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, they
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 begin to teach them Mongolian alongside English, so the younger is likely to face difficulties in his studies. In contrast, I agree with those who believe that 
children
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 should learn another 
language
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 during the  early stages of schooling
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 because that time should be used to educate the kid about their 
mo ther
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mother
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 tongue or a standard 
language
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 that is widely used in daily life as well as in professional 
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.
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,
this
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 linguistic skill set suggests what they have
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. To summarize, it appears that middle childhood in educational institutions should be taught primarily in their home country's official
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 a popular speech in order to strengthen their basics and,
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, should not be confused with another one.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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