Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: •Introduce yourself •Explain what the problems is •Suggest solutions to the problem You do not need to write any addresses

Dear Sir, My name is Sana Farooq and I am a resident of the Alnoor Society of Federal B Area. I am writing
this
letter to bring to your notice that there is development work going on at lane 4 where I am residing. Even though, the ongoing project is to facilitate the locals, but, too much noise is destroying the peace of the neighbourhood. The local government is digging the road to set up new water pipelines so that people may not face any water scarcity issues.
Also
,
this
new plan will stop locals from opting for the Bowring option which
also
produces too much noise. So, we don't want
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task to stop, but, to find a way to reduce the producing sound ,especially during the night. I suggest that get the digging and labour work
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done during the
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and not after the maghrib when people return to their homes from offices. I really want you to consider my request and take serious action. Looking forward to a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Sana Farooq
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