Internet has changed our lives and economies besides turning our world into a global village . To what extent do u agree ?

At present time, we are so
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dependant
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on
internet
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that it has changed our lives and economies
besides
turning our world into a global village.
As a result
, everybody will think and behave in the same way. I completely agree with
this
opinion because
internet
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has become a part and parcel of our life. Certainly
Internet
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has made our life more easy and
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comfortable than we could ever imagine. Our life is fully dependent on
Internet
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. From waking up from bed in the morning and going to sleep at night, we can't
spent
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a single moment without
internet
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.
Internet
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also
play
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a vital role in
educational
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sector , medical sector and many more. Earlier,students had to be dependent on
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the teacher
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teacher
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for teaching but now, they can learn anything and can clear their
confusions
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from
Internet
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.
Besides
,it
also
keeps us updated about international affairs. But it didn't only
effect
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our lives but
also
economies
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our economies
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. Because of
internet
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,
the
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unemployed people are not unemployed anymore. They can earn huge
amount
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of money through freelancing with the help of
internet
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the internet
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.
By
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the help of
internet
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, we can communicate with our relatives sitting in any corner of the world .
Moreover
, it
also
helped us to know unknown people,
to
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communicate with the people of other countries. Through
internet
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, we can know the culture and
tradition
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of other countries. We can know how they think and can know their views.
Internet
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has
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lessen
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our distance and
turn
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our world into a global village .
Overall
,
internet
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played a huge role to improve our lives and economies and it is still doing. Because of exchanging views and getting familiar with other cultures through
internet
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, everybody will think and act in the same.
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