Space exploration is too much expensive and the money should be spent on more important things

Nowadays, many scientists try hard to explore
space
or new planets.
However
,
space
exploration is too much expensive. Many of the
Earth
's population want to spend money on other projects. Personally, I believe that scientists and governments should spend more attention on the exploration of
space
. On the one hand, it is true that humans cannot live on
Earth
in the future. The main reason is oxygen.
People
do not notice how their actions polluted the atmosphere. The
next
reason is that the
Earth
cannot provide peace of life for
people
and soon
Earth
cannot provide food
such
as fruits and vegetables. The
last
important problem is the mineral resources. In near future, we will be faced with problems
such
as a lack of mineral resources as the World population is growing.
For instance
, one billion
people
are born in the
last
decade. It is twice as much as before.
As a result
, the
planet
will be destroyed by overpopulation.
On the other hand
,
it is clear that
the majority of the population thinks that exploring the cosmos is very expensive and it should be better if the government spend
this
money on education, ecology, and to safe
Planet
.
Furthermore
,
this
is not a bad idea, but it takes more time to educate
people
who will be safe and protect our
Earth
, and it brings more time to reestablish the ecology and so on. A better way will be to find a new
planet
for humanity to live in. Some
people
will continue to live on
Earth
and some of the populace who want to live on another
planet
will start a new civilization with a better method. For sample, the populace knows about the project called
Space
X.
This
project made great strides in
space
exploration, especially since the company is exploring Mars gives good consequences.
To sum up
,
although
many
people
believe that
this
investigation is not beneficial for the
people
, personally, I believe that scientists can reach a good result from these activities.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
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  • In general

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