Space exploration is too much expensive and the money should be spent on more important things

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government should measure their countries'

progress

.

While

space exploration is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of

progress

are just as important. There are three

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reasons why exploration growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries.

Firstly

, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens.

Secondly

,

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ensures that more money is available for

government

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to spend on infrastructure and public service.

For instance

, a government with higher revenues can invest in the

country

's transport network, its education system and its hospitals.

Finally

, a strong economy can help a

country

's standing on the global stage, In terms of its political influence and trading power.

However

, I would argue that various other forms of

progress

are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. Perhaps, another key consideration when judging the

progress

of a modern

country

should be how well that

country

protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of

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could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents In conclusion, I believe that

rest

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action

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of

progress

are just valuable