Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.

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because of some benefits, there are some arguments
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be made against the idea.
This
essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding
view
. On the one hand, those who support the boarding school
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cite the various advantages that the activities can bring to the student. These range from joining the language learning clubs and activities to discovering
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niche hobbies.
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, a residential living student from
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project club has a chance to join arts to enhance their hobbies and to discover more about
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their passion. Another argument is
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lesson about connection and conflict that would improve the potential to lead
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people with contrasting points of
view
.
By contrast
, opponents of
this
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point out that boarding boys and girls can feel more
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with busy
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and daily routines. Examples can
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parents would force the children to study hard,
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on all subjects, and sometimes it leads to
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the things they love.
In addition
, it might be not easy for students to live alone without their families or to live with other students. Since the children live far away from home, may often feel homesick and lonely because of isolation from their family members.
Overall
, it would appear that the decision to attend residential school should be based on
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interest, endurance and personal
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skill
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with others, rather than on a general
view
that boarding schools are an excellent option for children.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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