These days, a lot of people have their own computers and mobile. It has become quite easy do job from home. Do you think, it has more advantages and disadvantages to do work from home? I

These days smartphones and computers are the most famous and attract the population in the entire world.
however
,
this
improvement in technology provides cons and pros of using these devices.here I figure out the both benefits and drawbacks.
Firstly
, I refer to the two advantages of having these things.one is, that busy people can consume their time and work quickly.
for example
, someone
travel
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to their
workplace
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they have to face traffic issues and lose their time a lot. Not only
this
one but it makes another positive effect
also
.
that is
the workers can do their commitments clearly and perfectly. For
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instant, a person who is doing work at home
,
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has no disturbance and any other stress as well.
On the other hand
,smart devices make lots of issues and drawbacks
such
as teamwork and communication between their colleagues avoided by
this
.
for example
, if they do
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homes
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,they never meet their staff and discuss
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them .and
other
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problem
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is that storage of promotional activities.
This
means when they work at home,their development and improvement are not calculated. In conclusion, smartphones and laptops or PC make huge changes among people .but there are lots of drawbacks than benefits.
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