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In many countries today people are choosing to have fewer children. Why is this the cause? What are the effects of this trend on the society?

#countries #people #children #effects #trend #society
World citizens of
21st
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the 21st
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 century are very
well educated
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well-educated
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 and financially independent
due to
 modern education practices.
In addition
 to that, the economical growth of many developed countries has led to a surge in
cost
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the cost
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 of living. These factors have forced people to have fewer
children
 and
such
 action will have
long term
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 consequences.
While
 people from
previous
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the previous
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 century preferred to have many kids,
millenials
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millennials
 do not wish to have more
then
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than
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 two
children
,
some times
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sometimes
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 even one. One of the reasons for
such
 a behaviour is
due to
 the awareness of
impacts
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the impacts
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 of
over population
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overpopulation
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.
For instance
,
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the government
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government
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governments
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 of various countries conduct campaigns and run
propoganda
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propaganda
 to sensitize
poeple
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people
 about the
benifits
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benefits
 of having a nuclear family.
Such
 kind of strategies
are
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is
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 implemented by the government to optimise the use of natural resources which is available
with
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to
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 the country. The
second
 reason for
such
 a decline in the size of the family is
due to
rise
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a rise
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 in living expenditure.
Inspite
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In spite
 of various
benifits
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benefits
such
 as
increase
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an increase
the increase
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 in life expectancy, modernisation has
also
 made it arduous to make one's
end
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ends
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 meet.
Thus
, people prefer to bear
few
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apply
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children
 so that they can sustain a decent
life style
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lifestyle
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. Modernisation has undoubtedly enhanced the life of human beings
in
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from
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 all perspectives.
However
, if
Gen eration
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Generation
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 Z community continue to bear fewer and fewer
children
, the economic contribution provided by the youth community towards the development of a country will take a toll.
Also
, a country will end up having
more
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a more
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 ageing population which might force it
invest
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to invest
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 heavily
on
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in
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 medical infrastructure.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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