Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • explain the reason for the noise • apologies for the noise • describe what action you will take

Dear Jerry, Hope you're doing well. I had come across your letter regarding the problems you faced because of the noisy environment in my flat. I am really sorry for
such
inconvenience. Actually,my family members arrived just a few days back. Since they are going to stay for a week only, some friends and relatives have been visiting my place to do a party with my parents. If our environment had caused a lot of trouble to you,
then
I am writing to you with apologies in my heart. You will not face any
such
issue in the coming times. For the rest of the days, I will try my best to hold the parties in a nearby hotel. Apart from that, I am going to keep the music at a soothing pace so that it can not cause any complications in the neighbourhood to anyone. Once again, I apologize to you. Keep in touch! Best Wishes Yogita
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • moreover
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