Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been suggested that there should be the same number of places in each and every university subject for

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men and women.

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my opinion, there being equal proportions of

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genders per subject would be

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unworkable and unjust.

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, having the same number of men and women on all degree

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is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill

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with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each

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, many

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are more popular with one

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than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions.

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, nursing

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tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these

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if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.

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believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university

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gender

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,Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course

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their qualifications. In

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way,

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men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. To illustrate, if a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it would be wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications. In conclusion, it would be

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impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
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