You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: · Explain your varied achievements over the past two years · Express your interest in growing with the company · Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion
Dear Frank,
I am writing with regard to my remuneration. I believe my performance for the
last
2 years has been critical to the company's success. Therefore
, I would like my salary to be reviewed. Moreover
, there was plenty of excellent client feedback directed towards the services provided by me, so I hope this
can be part of your consideration.
I am also
very passionate about developing the business. Not only I am passionate, but I also
believe I have the knowledge and skills necessary to boost the overall
service provided by the company. In addition
, I have been researching several ideas that I strongly believe can significantly increase our sales. I can certainly present them to you if my request is considered.
I would like to set up a meeting to discuss this
further
at any time that suits you. Thank you very much for your consideration and I look forward to your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
SamuelSubmitted by sam_danielo on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
