The given maps illustrate the evolution of two neighbouring regions between over a period of 50 years.
The given maps illustrate the evolution of two neighbouring regions
between
over a period of 50 years.
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, between 1962 and now we can see huge developments, with many facilities addedLinking Words
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Also
, roads were built to connect the regions.
From 1963 to 1985 the west side of the map had several changes. A housing state was added north-west of the region and slightly to the south a superstore was built. Between these facilities was constructed a road that goes Linking Words
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, located east of the leisure complex that was built. The same road was extended to Add an article
the north
east
, passing by Fonton, which had no Add an article
the east
facilitie
constructed.
Between 1985 and now, the Meadowside was transformed Correct your spelling
facilities
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a suburb, but no building was added. Change preposition
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, in Fonton several developments happened over Linking Words
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period. South of the road a business park was erected and north of both, a train station was built. Slightly north-east of these Linking Words
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a Hotel was added.Add a comma
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