The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
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The bar chart provides information about how many per
cent
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of males and
females
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work as academic staff among faculties of a university. Generally speaking, male workers dominate almost all subjects provided in the chart. At the same time, subjects like Arts and Education attract more women than men working as academic members. In terms of workers who were dominated by
females
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, it is obviously clear from the graph that there are about 58 per
cent
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of people working as an academic in Arts come from the female gender, compared to male workers, lower by 16 %. The most considerable margin is shown in the Education course, where
females
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lead by almost 50 per
cent
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compared to the males, who account for only around 22
percent
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. The academic staff, who are male, are primarily spread in the Engineering, Law, and Science courses. As the chart depicts that there are significantly more members from males (almost 82 per
cent
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) than
females
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working in the field of academics (only around 18 per
cent
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).
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, both genders are equal in working as academics in Medicine Faculty.
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