Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in therir adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour.

In today's perceptual Transforming epoch. The trend of going abroad has increased around the world.

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recently, a high ratio of the masses prefer to go abroad

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past years .in order to become integrated into society in their Nation .Few mankind opines that immigrants should be prohibited their previous way and brought to local duty and codes of communication. I agree to a huge extent with the above Nation and ,I have given my reason

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a suitable justification in the forthcoming paragraph. Taking into account the agreement side of

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phenomenon, first and foremost ,going abroad will be beneficial for those who wanted to do higher

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,nowadays ,the

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worldwide have been increasing and

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population

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country does not have enough job employment and good

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,India, China and Pakistan have a high ratio of populations and because of

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, the nation's government does not have sufficient employment for students and employees .So ,many students and employees prefer to go abroad to get good jobs and

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India

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and Pakistani most people and students prefer to go to Canada and Australia because

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their

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is not higher compared to India.So ,everyone can get employment and

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easily. Another is people want a healthy lifestyle

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the high

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. air pollution, water pollution and

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noise pollution have increased around the Global. some countries

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as Canada ,Australia, New Zealand and others countries which not have higher populations and since that, many masses are want to go abroad to live healthy and safe.

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,many masses want to learn new cultures and languages .So ,they go abroad. In conclusion, nowadays, people must live on both sides and leave both cultures without any discrimination.