Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Making
friends
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and maintaining a good relationship with them is the most critical part of anyone’s
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. These critical
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would be easy when we find
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with similar
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,
opinions
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, likes and ideas. Some argue that rather than having
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mates
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it is adequate to have those who
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our
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when the
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are
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unlikely
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manner. In my
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I strongly believe that we should have
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who disagree with our
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when we are likely to be having wrongful ideas,
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or
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.
Firstly
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, having
friends
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with similar
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,
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, likes and
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in
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life
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is a must and foremost thing. Because whenever we need second
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in
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to decide
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actions over
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critical or simple situation we seek one of our best
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just to ensure that what would have someone with similar thinking had addressed the situation and
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we seek support
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our idea.
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Consequently
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it will be boosting our energy to convert
whatever
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our
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,
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and ideas
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into meaningful actions which will be helping in building our successful lifestyle.
On the other hand
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, we should
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consider
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to act
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, what is right for the situation rather than blindly supporting our
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because
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of having
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similar tastes. We should all have
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who daringly correct
out
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our
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thoughts
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whenever it is misleading
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a
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wrong direction. Because thinking in the opposite way
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ourselves
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to
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worst
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the worst
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conditions
also
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.
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although
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friends
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for friends
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with similar
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is good,
but
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it is not advisable to have them.
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we should have
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with similar
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and daring
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to disagree
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with us
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whenever it is required in our
life
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.
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