You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear

Mr.

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Singh, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that

due to

unavoidable circumstances, I will not be able to continue my certification course.

Due to

the heavy workload in the office, it was becoming difficult for me to manage both courses together and

also

it caused me severe disease,

as a result

, my doctor suggested focusing only on one task at a time. As our family's only source of income is my full-time job, I decided to sacrifice my academic course and continue with my office work.

However

, I want to focus on my health and decided to give

this

time to Yoga and physical training. I would like to request the experience certificate for the period I attended and it will help me to resume the course in the near future when I am physically fit. I hope you can understand my situation and thank you for your time and efforts. Yours sincerely, Trilochan Singh

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8 paragraphs

163 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?