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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear
Mr.
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 Singh, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that
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 unavoidable circumstances, I will not be able to continue my certification course.
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 the heavy workload in the office, it was becoming difficult for me to manage both courses together and
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 it caused me severe disease,
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, my doctor suggested focusing only on one task at a time. As our family's only source of income is my full-time job, I decided to sacrifice my academic course and continue with my office work.
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, I want to focus on my health and decided to give
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 time to Yoga and physical training. I would like to request the experience certificate for the period I attended and it will help me to resume the course in the near future when I am physically fit. I hope you can understand my situation and thank you for your time and efforts. Yours sincerely, Trilochan Singh
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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