In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
In the modern
world
, where Use synonyms
population
of people continues to grow rapidly, a significant amount of innovations and advances have been made Add an article
a population
the population
for
the past decade in Change preposition
over
agricultural
sector in order to provide Add an article
the agricultural
growing
population with sufficient food. Correct article usage
the growing
Although
, there are still a lot of people who suffer from hunger. Linking Words
This
essay will cover a reason and a solution, which I Linking Words
beleive
, can make a difference quickly enough.
It is not a secret, that a majority of Correct your spelling
believe
a
new technological breakthroughs and innovations in agriculture were made in developed Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
countries
. Most of them were highly expensive and, Use synonyms
therefore
, only Linking Words
first
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first-world
world
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countries
could afford to Use synonyms
implemented
them successfully. Change the verb
implement
According to
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the
recent study made by Correct article usage
a
american
scientists almost 75 per cent of all crops harvested worldwide in the Change the capitalization
American
last
year were made in developed Linking Words
countries
. Use synonyms
Thus
, the conclusion can be made, that Linking Words
second
and Linking Words
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third
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third-world
world
Use synonyms
countries
can not afford all of those advances for their agricultural sectors, Use synonyms
consequently
harvesting Linking Words
less
crops per square meter of cultivated area and not managing to provide their population with enough food.
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fewer
This
issue is quite difficult to tackle, Linking Words
nonetheless
, in my opinion, there is Linking Words
a
one way to solve it. Correct article usage
apply
That is
to establish charity organisations in developing Linking Words
countries
, that would help local farmers to implement different innovations for free, increasing their crop efficiency per square Use synonyms
meters
and Fix the agreement mistake
meter
hence
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decrease
the Wrong verb form
decreasing
leven
of starving people.
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level
To conclude
, the Linking Words
expenciveness
of new technologies in agriculture Correct your spelling
expensiveness
expansiveness
have
made Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
disparity in the modern Linking Words
world
, when some Use synonyms
countries
can produce a sufficient amount of products to feed their nation, Use synonyms
while
others suffer from Linking Words
a hunger
. But no matter how Remove the article
hunger
a pang of hunger
difficalt
Correct your spelling
difficult
this
problem might be seen, I strongly believe, that letting these Linking Words
countries
Use synonyms
to
acquire new technologies for free will help them to avoid Fix the infinitive
apply
a
starvation in the future, and both developed and developing Remove the article
apply
countries
will benefit from it.Use synonyms
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