online shopping will be the closing reason of all shops in cities and towns, do you agree or disagree
With digitalization, modern society prefers e-shopping more
than
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This
issue directly affects all the physical stores in the world. I partially agree with this
statement because most of
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teenagers
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the teenagers
young
crowd are interested in ordering online rather than physically purchasing as it saves time and is easy . I'll explore more in the below paragraphs.
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To begin
with, there are several advantages in
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, Amazon, e-bay
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you can compare the same product with other brands with a single tap. Add a comma
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the website will arrange fast delivery. It is Add a comma
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time consuming
and easy to order. These key facts help individuals to pick e-shopping rather than in-store shopping.
There is always another group of people, who are in love with visual shopping. Because they need to touch and feel the product before buying it. Not only Add a hyphen
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they enjoy the
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shops
and malls ,Furthermore
there is a trend among teenagers, that they like to upload their selfies, and locations on social media. For example
, teen girls in Sri Lanka, post their day-to-day routine on social media as mini vlogs. They mention all the shops
they go to and the places they are check-in. This
helps the shops
to survive as they get free publicity.
In conclusion, It is true that there is a risk to shut down some shops
due to
online shopping. But not all shops
. As we discussed still there are few individuals who prefer physical purchasing.Submitted by murph on
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