Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Other's however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The rate of committing

crime

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is on the rise. Some state that we should vary the methods of

punishment

according to

the individual circumstances and

motivation

to perform criminal

activites

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activities

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and discuss my

opinion

on the

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.

Firstly

, using an approach with fixed

punishments

will save a lot of

time

of

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the policemen and lawyers. With the rising

number

of criminal cases, it is hard to allocate

time

to skim through every single criminal activity.

Therefore

, if we can provide

with

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a fixed list of

punishments

for certain

crimes

it is easier to process.

However

, some victims may think that having fixed

punishment

to

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for

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specific

crimes

is unfair from their side. They would want to include their discomfort caused by the criminal to be justified by the law.

On the other hand

, a

punishment

to

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for

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crime

ranges from minor to severe depending on the

number

of attempts,

motivation

, and

severity

. Social service, imprisonment,

life-

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time

sentence, and capital

punishment

are some of the popular

punishments

. It is evident that some atrocious activities caused by serial killers can not be punished in the same

way

like

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a

theif

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thief

would be punished.

For instance

, the

way

Ten Buddy, a serial killer feared by many women in the late 1980s was sentenced to

death

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penalty as the board of judges believed that there was no

punishment

that can justify the

way

he had murdered innocent women.

To conclude

, in my

opinion

, criminal offences should take many factors

such

as

motivation

,

severity

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the severity

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of the

crime

, individual mindset, and

severity

of the damage caused to the victim party,

in to

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into

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consideration before giving

punishment

. The rate of committing

crime

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a crime

the crime

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is on the rise. Some state that we should vary the methods of

punishment

according to

individual circumstances and

motivation

to perform criminal

activites

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activities

. In

this

essay

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I will discuss both views and discuss my

opinion

on the

above mentioned

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above-mentioned

show examples

.

Firstly

, using an approach with fixed

punishments

will save a lot of

time

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

policemen and lawyers. With the rising

number

of criminal cases, it is hard to allocate

time

to skim through every single criminal activity.

Therefore

, if we can provide

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

a fixed list of

punishments

for certain

crimes

it is easier to process.

However

, some victims may think that having fixed

punishment

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

specific

crimes

is unfair from their side. They would want to include their discomfort caused by the criminal to be justified by the law.

On the other hand

, 

punishments

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

crime

range from minor to severe depending on the

number

of attempts,

motivation

, and

severity

.

For instance

,

punishments

range from imprisonment,

life-

Correct your spelling

lifetime

show examples

time

sentence, and capital

punishment

. It is evident that some atrocious activities caused by serial killers can not be punished in the same

way

like

Change preposition

as

show examples

a

theif

Correct your spelling

thief

would be punished.

To conclude

, in my

opinion

, criminal offences should take many factors

such

as

motivation

,

severity

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the severity

show examples

of the

crime

, individual mindset, and

severity

of the damage caused to the victim party,

in to

Join the words

into

show examples

consideration before giving

punishment

.