Some people think the money spent on developing the technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the amount of

money

spent

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space

travel had been increasing to develop more new technology, and opponents believe that the

money

should invest in other

sectors

in order to fully utilize the investment. In my opinion, there are several reasons why I do not agree with the statement. First and foremost,

space

exploration has boosted scientific research. The

money

spent on

space

tourism is the key for scientists to invent new technology, which may

also

lead other industries to work with

space

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industry on research and development.

For instance

, smartphones

camera

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cameras

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,

sofware

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software

, and robots

are develop

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from

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space

travel

sectors

.

Besides

,

space

exploration can create lots of jobs that

helps

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help

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millions of people around the world find jobs in

space

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industry. To

further

illustrate, engineers,

space

designers, and trainers, all of which is in high demand.

Hence

, when there are more job opportunities available in the

space

sectors

,

the

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unemployment will decrease

,

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and

thus

boost the

country

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economy.

By contrast

, some critics argue that the government should

spent

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money

in

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public

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the public

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sectors

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sector

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instead

of

space

tourism. It is true that the

money

spent in public

sectors

such

as transportation,

maintance

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maintenance

of public infrastructures, and education will benefit the mass. To quote an example, the government could utilize the

money

to enhance the education system so that more kids had the chance to get a better education. The

money

should

also

be spent

in

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upgrading

the

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public facilities like

hospital

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hospitals

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, police

station

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stations

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, and

the

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train station, these could greatly improve the

citizens

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citizen's

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quality of life.

Furthermore

, these funds should be used

in

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subsidize the

low class

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people to help them at least get a decent meal, which could decrease the

occurance

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occurrence

of social issues in a nation. In conclusion, there are various methods for

government

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the government

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to

spent

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money

either

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space

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industry or

public

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the public

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sectors

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sector

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.

However

, I think the

money

spent

in

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space

travel is reasonable and

governmentshould

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governments should

continue to invest as it is part of the contribution to

the

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humanity.