One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: •describe why you want to work in that country; •tell him/her about your skills and experience; •ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)

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Dear Don, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I'm planning to immigrate and spend some time working in your

country

. It would be great

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if you can share some insights into the working culture in your

country

. Recently I came across some of the news articles sharing about work-life balance in your

country

This

sparked an interest in me to explore more about your

country

. I'm working in an IT company managing critical systems supporting communities. Considering, the nature of my work, we would be required to extend beyond working hours. I'm interested to know, how people in your

country

handle similar situations in order to maintain a good work-life balance. Apart from work culture, please share some details about wages in the market matching with my experience.

This

is to plan

accordingly

for my migration to your

country

. Looking forward to your reply. Thanks & Regards,

Submitted by mahesh.malla on Tue Apr 09 2024

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Content

To strengthen your letter, you might consider directly answering each of the prompts in a more detailed manner. For instance, elaborating more specifically on why you wish to work in the friend's country, discussing your skills and experiences in greater depth, and asking more direct questions about work (e.g., specific questions about wage, types of work available).

Language

Using a variety of sentence structures and linking words can further enhance the flow and coherence of your writing.

Structure

Your letter is nicely structured into paragraphs, each covering a distinct topic as requested.

Tone

You have used a suitable and polite tone throughout your letter, making your requests and inquiries respectfully.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

150 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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