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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and tv crime dramas? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, books, teledramas, and movies in the crime category have become
globaly
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globally
 famous.
According to
 my knowledge, the high curiosity in these
stories
 is the key factor for them to be more popular among many people.
However
, these are having both positive and negative impacts on human life. The thriller scenes of these dramas are well emphasized and the quality of these products is very high. Most crime movies use the newest technology to bring more reality to these productions and the same has become one of the main reasons for these
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 very famous. Anyway, on the one hand, Most of these
stories
 provide people with good awareness of criminal activities that could happen to anyone. Humans who regularly watch and read criminal
stories
 will always have an idea
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 their
mind
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what
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 precautions they could follow in
such
 a situation.
For example
,I came across an incident where one
my
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 friend’s wife had been able to save her life from a guy who tried to rape her at the college auditorium.
On the other hand
,
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society gets to learn new methods of conducting crimes using high-end technology.
Moreover
,
such
 thriller
stories
 would help them to identify various ways of destroying evidence of any murder.
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instance
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 I recently read a newspaper article regarding a bank robbery that happened in new york. The police investigations have found out that the criminal is someone who is badly addicted
in
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 watching
of
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criminal TV series.
Further
, they have identified that the whole process of the particular
robery
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robbery
 is there in a famous movie. In conclusion,
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criminal movies and novels have become famous among human beings.
Although
 they have some positive effect,
also
 they
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 to more crimes within
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society.
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  • intriguing plot
  • suspense
  • immersive experience
  • well-developed characters
  • crime-solving techniques
  • legal procedures
  • psychological thrill
  • unraveling mysteries
  • societal issues
  • high-quality production values
  • well-crafted storyline
  • strong performances
  • engaging narrative
  • relatable dilemmas
  • thought-provoking content
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