Some people say that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or disagree?

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are the most popular concepts of learning and there is always a debate about whether these creative learnings should be added to the curriculum or not. Some people believe that

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these kinds of

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should be approved in the syllabus. I personally agree with

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viewpoint because, of the way extracurricular

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enrich and enhance

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's knowledge, no other

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won't do that way. The aim of education has changed a lot compared to the past and at present, learning is focused on preparing

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for the future fast-growing world.

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, in the past, several

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were compulsory for

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and without passing those

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no one could complete school. The compulsory

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language, math, and English were supposed to be mandatory for

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for their mental growth and education.

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, that trend has changed a lot and nowadays teachers and education planners are more inclined to creative thinking and cultural teaching. Creative thinking and writing are more effective for

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because rather than monotonous curriculums, encouraging creative writing and cultural

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inspires

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to think and learn better. It is a popular belief that

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imagination is better than knowledge and cultural

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, art, drama, and music exactly promote that sort of teaching. That's why I believe that these types of

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need to be included in the timetable of the students. A recent study from Yale University demonstrates that

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practising art, culture, and drama assists

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in decision-making, creative thinking and

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, building confidence.

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, Creative writing and music, drama and art can activate the mind of

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about the reality of the world and teach them how to cope with it.

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, there is no alternative to adding these

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to the school curriculum.