Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?
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life
expectance rate of some nation is extreme, but their increased life rate has many implications for Correct article usage
the life
aging
individuals and for society as a whole. Change the spelling
ageing
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essay will discuss all the possible effects for a longer living generation and the community Aging has its advantages and disadvantage
in both sectors Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
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public and humankind. Correct article usage
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some positive impacts for maturing would be that they gain ample experience by working in various careers, managing the
health and maintaining household chores, mankind gains wisdom from those who are well-known and knowledgeable people because they have seen the world with a bigger lens and with age their point of view has improved. Change the word
their
For example
, in Vietnam, Japan, India, and China, the older generation have
knowledge to curate medicine from medicinal herbs with lots of trials their technique has upgraded, and those herbs have been proven to escalate one’s life span. Change the verb form
has
On the contrary
, counties economy gets affected, asCorrect article usage
the
Although
in certain regions there are rules that senior citizens can perform less labour work and earn their living with it. Correct word choice
However
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my
conclusion, there are both negative and positive aspects of agingCorrect pronoun usage
apply
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that
effects
on person and the whole civilization. In my Correct your spelling
affect
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experience and expertise both matter but on the the stake of little less profit to the societyCorrect your spelling
opinion
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite