Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that

globalization

and the increasing number of multinational

companies

affect to

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. I partially disagree with

this

statement, because through

globalization

, many

companies

start to try to solve crucial

environment

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issues. On the one hand, rapid

globalization

and

sharp

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increase of multinational

companies

might cause

destruction

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the destruction

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of

globe

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the globe

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. Some

of

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companies

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the companies

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tend to construct factories in

some

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foreign

place

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places

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which there are affluent

nature

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, to prepare for the inclining of demand thanks to

globalization

.

In addition

, they tend to ignore the rule of each

regions

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because they do not afford to check these regulations

due to

rapid

globalization

. In the case of some developed countries in Asia, expansion of factories area, some

deforestration

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deforestation

and water pollution of the sea

are occurred

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. It must be because of

the

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globalization

and rising the number of multinational

companies

.

On the other hand

, to be

globalization

and

become

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multinational

companies

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company

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means these

companies

have more opportunities to understand the situation of each

countries

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country

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about

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regarding

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environment

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and get some knowledge about the solutions of protecting

destroy

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destruction

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of nature.

In addition

, these

company

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companies

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tend to spend their allocation

to

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sustainability, so through

these information

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, they can tackle

to

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these issues more effectively. In Malaysia, a Japanese appliance company, which constructed some factories in Malaysia, tried to approach

to reduce

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garbage by using

recycle

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material

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materials

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to

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for

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their products. As a

results

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, the amount of some types of garbage is decreasing now. In conclusion, I reiterate that

globalization

and the growing

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number of multinational

companies

have a not only bad

effect

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effects

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, but

also

positive

effect

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effects

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to

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environment

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, and

benefits

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outweigh

drawbacks

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the drawbacks

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