Write a letter declinging the job offer.

20.01.2023 Dear Sir, I'm writing

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letter to let you know my decision regarding the job offer. I respectfully decline the offer

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some ethical and fair reasons ,

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I would like to line up the reasons.

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will help you to get a better understanding.

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, I prefer to talk about the salary. I requested a certain amount for my position after doing

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proper research on salary scales. But the organization has decided to offer 50% of the requested amount, which is clearly not acceptable. I'm a skilled graduate. Not only that, but a qualified designer worked at a reputed company in the apparel industry.

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I will not be able to accept

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salary for my qualification and experience.

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, I went through the job description before coming the to interview ,

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the organization looking for more work to be done than the JD,

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working extra is not an issue,but I would be happy to help the organization if they agree to pay a reasonable amount for my knowledge. Hope you will understand my situation. Kind regards, Murph Perelman

murphThu Jan 26 2023

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

184 words

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Write a letter declinging the job offer.

The Greeting

Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and are unable to afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives

More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause?

The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems does this cause and what are some solutions to these problems?