Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home, say why you would like to do this work, explain when you will and will not be available.

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Deat Mrs Berrett, I am Mit. I am currently pursuing drama at the Bridgeton College of Arts. I saw your advertisement regarding the need for domestic help
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summer. I would be interested in the work since I have taken a break from my drama program for the summer semester to take part in a film project with local directors as a part-time position. Since I'll have spare time after the job, I would be able to help you with house chores. Since I live in the same neighbourhood as yours, I could help you with buying groceries and with errands. I have experience in cooking as well, I can cook various cuisines around the world. I will be able to work during the evening and I would not be available over weekends because over the weekend I will be away on field trips for the film project. Kindly let me know if the task is suitable for me. Regards,
Mit
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
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  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
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