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In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now to research other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The three diagrams illustrate information about the percentages of
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, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals eaten by Americans.These three may harm the body when consumed in large quantities.
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, it can be clearly seen from the charts that a majority of American citizens consume
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 and added
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 during breakfast and snacking time
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 a handful eats less
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 and added
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 in the morning.
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 with, during breakfast, a few individuals eat all three nutrients with just 14% taking
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 and the other 2 nutrients with both 16%. Coming to lunchtime, a considerable number of individuals eat
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 and saturated fat (29% and 26%)
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 19% eat added
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.
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, most Americans consume more
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 and saturated fat during dinner with 43% and 37% respectively.
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, snacks with added
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 eaten in large quantities of 42% and a small percentage being
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 (14%).
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