What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving school at 16 or 18 to work instead of going to university?

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There are lots of different paths students can opt for after finishing school. Not all these pathways are accepted by society but they certainly have pros and cons to them.
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plan for many
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not a choice. The main advantage of starting
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after school
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is
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of strong
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. When individuals start commuting to
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daily, they acquire
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deal of knowledge about how expensive modern life is.
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help them invest money
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products that secure their future. Individuals
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gain the chance to try different varieties of career fields before they are ready to commit to one.
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concept helps decrease college and university dropouts as people are more confident in their choices and happy with the field they choose.
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, students mostly start with hospitality jobs fresh out of school, they can
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advance themselves in similar studies and make a career as a hotel or event manager. Despite these advantages, not everybody has the same chances and they are
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not presented with familiar choices. As children from broken or challenged families are much rather pushed into working after secondary education.
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can have serious innumerable effects on their mental and physical health. All-in-all, when we are unwillingly thrown onto a pathway, there are high chances of failure.
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, if a student starts with manual labour as his first job, he might be able to reach his expenses now but as the world gets expensive, he is at risk of being stuck in the cycle of poverty. In conclusion, I can adhere
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various effects starting
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sooner can have on
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life. The choice of finishing university or starting
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should solely be based on the student and there should be no external force,
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my opinion.
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