Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots

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People think that the time will come when
robots
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with artificial intelligence will
work
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in place of people.
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opinion
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it is good on one side and bad on the other.Now
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list why it is bad and why it is good.
Robots
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can improve our life and
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it
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easier.Nowadays
robots
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began to help people in different areas of
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,android assistant help during operations.
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bots make artificial organs for humans to survive.We sometimes do not have time to clean the house because we
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or study a lot.Another type of
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robots
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with artificial intelligence is
cleaning
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a cleaning
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robots
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vacuum
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.During
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,
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robotic can clean everywhere and after
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work
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it will turn off automatically. The
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has many good qualities but
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has bad sides.
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as, if the
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does everything for us,
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we will become loafers and overweight may appear.Another disadvantage is that the
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is an expensive toy.If it breaks you will have to rebuild for repairs.Оne of
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mechanism from the head cortex costs 25-30 thousand dollars.The latest and most basic problem is when a person begins to mentally stop if a
robot
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will do everything in his place. about
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with artificial intelligence, I remain in the neutral zone because
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robot
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has its pluses and minuses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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