You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilites for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:say in general what you like about shopping in your area, say what is wrong with the facilities, suggest how they can be improved
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a resident of Maple Street and I am a frequent shopper of Mapple Greens Shopping Mall. I am writing
this
letter to express my suggestions to improve Linking Words
shopping
facilities situated in our area.
I can never deny that the shopping area provides convenience to every resident because it provides comprehensive services and supplies that suit the needs of the locals. There is no need for us to leave the town just to purchase products and appliances for almost everything from electric kettles to microwave ovens Correct article usage
the shopping
are
being sold here. Change the verb form
is
Not to mention
the bargains and big discounts it usually offers. Linking Words
Moreover
, the staff are very friendly and helpful Linking Words
especially
to senior citizens.
Add the comma(s)
,especially
However
, I have noted concerns with some of the facilities of the building that are in need of improvement. The markings on the parking areas are no longer visible, Linking Words
thus
making it difficult for shoppers to distinguish one parking slot from the other. Linking Words
Also
, the lights in the parking area are in need of replacement since three out of ten light bulbs are not anymore working.
Thank you so much for reading my letter. I hope for an urgent response regarding my requests.
Respectfully,
Raysan Joy LopezLinking Words
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,