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All children should be given a free laptop when they start high school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Every student who is entering high
school
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 classes ought to be provided with a
laptop
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 without any cost.
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 suggestion because giving
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complimentary
laptops
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 will assist pupils in their learning and will
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 benefit them when they will enter practical life. Generally, every student who is joining a higher
school
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 nowadays
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 needs to learn
computer
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 skills because of
importance
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the importance
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, information technology has gained over years. Many tasks are required to be performed on computers and other information technology tools.
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 reason, it is considered that every child should have access to a desktop,
laptop
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 or any other
computer
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 device. Mostly,
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educational institutions have
computer
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 labs but if a child will be having a portable device like
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laptop
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a laptop
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, it will become easier for
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child
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a child
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 to practice the tasks even at home or in a library.
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, the Pakistan government introduced
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laptop
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a laptop
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 program for
college going
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students
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, which
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 was considered by all to have an impact on
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learning.
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 to what is stated above, giving
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free
laptops
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 to high
school
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 children will facilitate them when they will complete their graduation and join some office or job. In recent times, almost every work requires, in one way or the other, a
computer
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 device and
presence
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the presence
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 of a gifted
laptop
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 will not put
extra
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an extra
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 burden on the employee to arrange for
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a handsome
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 sum of money generally required for purchasing these kinds of information technology gadgets. As an illustration, a
laptop
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 received by one of the brilliant
students
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 who hailed from a poor family was utilized when he got a new job, without
budening
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burdening
 his family financially. In conclusion,
students
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 who receive free
laptops
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 or tabs from the governments for their joining of higher education not only learn more techniques and skills but
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 utilize
such
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 assets when they enter their practical life. Having said that, it is recommended that governments should pursue
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 idea of rewarding
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school
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students
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 with
laptops
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 or other beneficial electronic devices.
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