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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school students. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is argued that international
languages
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 must be taught in primary school education. I believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks to learning foreign
languages
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 at an early stage of life than later on.
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 with, If a child is taught other
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 at an early age in life it would be easy for them to catch
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 knowledge. As children are like blank papers. they are easily learning a new
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 at an early age as compared to older people to learn something new.
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 , now these days it is necessary to learn other
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 because of globalisation. Because If someone wants to study abroad it is necessary for students to know about their accent to communicate with the local people of that country.
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, if someone wants to study in Canada they have to pass a
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 test called IELTS to admission to a college or university in that country.
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 studying foreign
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 has more benefits but it has some negative consequences too. As it makes a burden on the young ones because they already have so many subjects to read
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, a student who is already studying so many subjects in his school adding another
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 course to their syllabus increases the burden and
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 would decrease their
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 performance.
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, studying a foreign
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 is an additional plus point for a student to cooperate these days in
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, it might give them an extra load rather than studying their academic subjects.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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