Teaching students the practicality of
life
must be the goal of true education. With
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the teaching of
literacy among high school students to inculcate
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as early as possible.
Firstly
, several adults and even young
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nowadays suffer enormous debts though working 24/7 in a stable company and receiving a reasonable salary. The main reason
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this
is poor money management and lack of financial education.
For instance
, almost 90% of employees have salary loans, car loans, and
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under bank financing.
Moreover
, their net pay was not anymore sufficient to suffice daily needs because of automatic deductions to their payrolls.
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, they have to meet
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will be affected because of the
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people are experiencing.
I believe that education is the best solution to
this
predicament. Teaching citizens to be wise when it comes to finances will foster
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of
life
. Educators can
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the minds of young individuals by introducing them
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concepts on how to make savings out of their daily allowances. Through
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of instructions, their knowledge will
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and managing resources which will turn out to be a
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skill. Eventually, they will be
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in the near future.
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, they will have
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greater opportunities to travel abroad, dine in
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, purchase gadgets to produce quality output at work, and avail
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since they are trained to balance needs and wants.
Therefore
, most
they will experience a more comfortable
life
.
To conclude
, educating young minds
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money management means you are contributing to their success
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