Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss these two views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are people who would argue that it would be much

efficient

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to teach

students

in single-sex

schools

,

while

others say that co-ed

schools

are much better

instead

. I think that

students

would benefit more

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attending co-ed

schools

as opposed to single-sex

schools

. On one hand, single-sex

schools

eliminate any sort of distractions that might occur from

romatic

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romantic

interactions between a guy and a girl. Relationships will cause

students

to focus less on their studies as their minds are preoccupied

in

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impressing the opposite sex. Without

this

,

students

are able to focus much better on their studies and do well in their exams.

For example

, in Malaysia, single-sex

schools

would score a much higher average score than co-ed

schools

during the

end of year

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exams.

As a result

,

students

from single-sex

schools

are more successful academically.

On the other hand

, co-ed

schools

are much better when it comes to representing how society is in real life, where it is a healthy mix of both genders. It is a very crucial time of development for

students

at that age.

Hence

,

students

should be given the opportunity to develop social skills with their peers so that they can transition well into adulthood.

For instance

, graduates from co-ed

schools

can maintain a professional relationship with the opposite gender much better than their unisex counterparts.

This

would enable them to work more efficiently and get better job opportunities as they are able to work well in a team.

Hence

it is beneficial for the

students'

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future prospects. In conclusion, both co-ed

schools

and same-sex

schools

provide very nice benefits. Same-sex

schools

would help

students

in their studies and co-ed school prepare

students

for the future.

Nevertheless

, it is my personal belief that being able to develop social skills at a younger age in co-ed

schools

outweigh

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the prospect of getting better grades.