In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays a lot of people around the
world
live in conditions of poverty and the
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hunger is strictly connected to this
problem, despite the advances in the main processes of the agriculture industry. This
essay will discuss the main reasons associated with this
problem and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.
The main causes refer to the application of new methods and advanced techniques to the
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third
-world
countries
and the determined political willingness to fix starvation. A growing number of advanced technologies are applied to the agriculture industry but there are some places around the world
not yet well prepared to take advantage of these improvements. People from Africa, for instance
, have no experience and know-how to use these new technologies. What’s more, politician
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countries
in the world
have no willpower to define the trajectory of a specific plan to face famine or they are not able to create and coordinate a team that directly work on it.
In my opinion, the best solutions to this
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countries
to build there their facilities and encouraging politicians to visit some places to face in person what is happening every day. Firstly
, companies are required to reach the profitability of an investment and they should be able to have fiscal
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third-world
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, I think governments should finance travels
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In conclusion, the proper support to companies to transfer their set of expertise to Fix the agreement mistake
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countries
where hunger and poverty are basically the main problems and the effective awareness of this issue
are the most efficient solutions to starvation and famine.Fix the agreement mistake
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