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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. do you thing the advantages of this development woutweight the disadvantage?

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In
this
 modern era,
the
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life expectancy become longer because of
the
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medical improvement, which permits one to live a normal life even if some type of pathologies
such
 as diabetes or asthma. In fact, the benefits of
this
 big development in medical knowladagement provide specific medicine that a person can take daily to contrast his pathologies even if he or she can not really heal from it. To illustrate, in the case of people with seasonal allergies, they can take some particular strong
drugs
 for a long period of time to continue all the activities that they normally do as work, study or play sports.
On the other hand
, it is true that a downside of
this
 big choice of
drugs
 can create problems
such
 as addiction or abuse. In response to it, the government create a law by which the strongest
drugs
 can be given
also
 after a doctor's prescription with the precise quantity needed by the patient. In spite
of
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 , every subject should be responsible and use the medicine only if necessary.
In addition
, we must remember that our grandparents, in the past years when they were young, the probability to die for
cold
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 or flu was so high
while
 nowadays is almost impossible and only thak to all medical research and discovers, In summary, medical development permit that a lot of people live a normal life and
that
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a lot of
sickness
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 can be cured or alleviated with
a
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the
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 right use of
drugs
 which must be controlled and selected by doctors.
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