What are the advantages and disadventages of the increasing use of technology?

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of
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is beneficial .One of the main advantages of increasing
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of
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is that it can simplify our
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. Nowadays are
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modern-day . All
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people
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can use
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. In my opinion, some
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can not imagine their
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without
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up with
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,
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phones
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, washing
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machines
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,
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computers
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and
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others
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.
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Furthermore
, technologies are inventing . So , it can be beneficial for everyone . There
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various
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opportunities
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for learning .
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, watching videos ,
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as cooking , sewing and other . They help to improve skills .
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, I think ,
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increasing use
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has various
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disadvantages
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, I can say that using
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a mobile
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phone
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phones
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or
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computers
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much more is harmful
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health , especially for
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the eyes
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. What is more , some
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's
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is depending on
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. The main worry about that
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can take human's place in the near future .
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,
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always look for quick solutions to their problems . In my opinion,
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can live without
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.
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, they think that they can not live .
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they do not try for
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. In prehistoric times ,
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can live without
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. All things considered,
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are being part of our
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