It is important to give children a possibility to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

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there is a campaign to live freely in

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world, I strongly disagree

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people give opportunities to

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children

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in order to create their own decisions. The young generations

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lack

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experience and knowledge. In

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cycle of life,

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children

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ought to observe their parents, learn a lot of mistakes, and distinguish between the wrong actions and the

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correct actions.

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, they need

guided

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from their parents, resulting in

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higher quality of their life.

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, if offsprings try to smoke because they do

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know whether it is right or not, the parents should be there and prevent the phenomenon. If youngsters create their own options, they will

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mislead

, and it might develop

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bad habits and diseases,

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as stroke and heart failure.

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, the juniors are still unstable with their emotions and actions.

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because they

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are still learning

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about people's

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and

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the

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environment

. To illustrate

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, if adults can give the best figure and raise their

children

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perfectly, like there is no divorce and

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between each other, the

children

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will have

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stability of emotions, positive personality traits, and decent academic performances in the future.

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, I completely disagree to provide youngsters

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opportunites

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opportunity

to move independently. In

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case, the adults have a role to guide and be the best figure to prevent

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detrimental effects on the young generations