Although
there is a campaign to live freely in
this
world, I strongly disagree
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people give opportunities to
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children
in order to create their own decisions.
The young generations
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experience and knowledge. In
this
cycle of life,
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children
ought to observe their parents, learn a lot of mistakes, and distinguish between the wrong actions and the
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correct actions.
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from their parents, resulting in
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higher quality of their life.
For instance
, if offsprings try to smoke because they do
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know whether it is right or not, the parents should be there and prevent the phenomenon. If youngsters create their own options, they will
, and it might develop
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bad habits and diseases,
such
as stroke and heart failure.
On the other hand
, the juniors are still unstable with their emotions and actions.
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and
also
the
. To illustrate
this
, if adults can give the best figure and raise their
children
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between each other, the
children
will have
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stability of emotions, positive personality traits, and decent academic performances in the future.
To sum up
, I completely disagree to provide youngsters
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to move independently. In
this
case, the adults have a role to guide and be the best figure to prevent
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detrimental effects on the young generations