Some people believe that song lyrics which glorify violence and criminal lifestyle should be banned. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a ban.

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relevant

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, others oppose it,

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violent relevant

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crimes

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and bring peace, despite the restriction

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freedom

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feeling against the authority that maybe grows. Indeed, imposing

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against improper activity sometimes result in limited

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freedom

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any cost.

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countries, tend to forbid any races parties, for the sake of

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unity,

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safe country. another negative point

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is the

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feeling of oppression. Certainly, when

authority

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apply

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rules regarding

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things, some will express

unpleasent

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unpleasant

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, they will think the system is not fair,

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they will have

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feeling

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against the government.

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,

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eliminates

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violent songs and any

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lifestyle, will

brings

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peace and

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crimes

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average, these songs and attitudes have a significant role in

spoilling

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teenagers

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minds,

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effects

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teens imitate blindly the

gangs

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style. For

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example

, allowing acts that glorify

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lifestyles will

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the population,

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youth

people

, they are more likely to

immitate

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imitate

such

acts without

percives

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perceives

the

conseqences

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consequences

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hence

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may commit crimes.

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prohibitation

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prohibition

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violent

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, in any form, is

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crucial. In conclusion, despite the

freedom

restriction and the feeling of oppression examined by some

people

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prohibiting

violence

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in songs and other media is

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imperative.