Write a letter to your friend and describe you previous day

Dear Dave, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing to tell you how I spent my typical day in Canada. I live in a tiny village which is located on Calragy outskirts,

therefore

my wake up is so quiet usually. As it was yesterday

also

. I started my morning with a cup of coffee, even two, and continued with reading news from Ukraine.

Then

I checked my email for any job offers, but it was not successful. After breakfast, I had a lesson with you and a zoom-meeting in one hour after we had finished. After that, I went to the town to buy some food and a new pen for my writing training. After I had returned I was reading and

listened

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to some educational stuff. After dinner, I took a break for watching the Grand Tour series in English. I've finished my day with the IELTS Reading exercise, which I still find a bit confusing.

That is

all for now. I will be happy to see you tomorrow. All the best, Alex

Submitted by sashko.holodniy on Fri Jan 27 2023

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

176 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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