Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to express my excitement and to inquire about details about the upcoming shopping centre mall in the Heartland area of Mississauga. Actually, I have been living in

this

area for the

last

5 years and I got excited when I saw a commercial advertisement on social media about the construction of a new shopping centre building by Singh builders in 2024. My neighbours and I are extremely excited and delighted about

this

new facility within an easy walk from our residents. We tend to go shopping in the Square one mall which is at a remote location from our accommodation and I am sure

this

new project will definitely make our life not only more convenient but

also

more enjoyable.

However

, the commercial that I came across had only limited information. Even though I tried to discover more on the internet, I got nothing. I would appreciate it if you could elaborate on the project a little more like when the construction work will commence, and when can we expect to go shopping in the mall.

Moreover

, who will inaugurate

this

new building in our area? We are requesting all

this

information because we are getting so excited to spend our leisure time over there. I look forward to receiving your response soon. Regards Sandeep Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

224 words

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Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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Computers are being used more in education nowadays than in the past. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Many believe that being good at a sport is result of talent while others think that it comes from hard work. Discuss both views and give your reasons.

Some parents purchase their kids a large number of toys to play with.What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having lot of toys.