Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

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letter to express my excitement and to inquire about details about the upcoming shopping centre mall in the Heartland area of Mississauga. Actually, I have been living in

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area for the

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5 years and I got excited when I saw a commercial advertisement on social media about the construction of a new shopping centre building by Singh builders in 2024. My neighbours and I are extremely excited and delighted about

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new facility within an easy walk from our residents. We tend to go shopping in the Square one mall which is at a remote location from our accommodation and I am sure

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new project will definitely make our life not only more convenient but

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more enjoyable.

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, the commercial that I came across had only limited information. Even though I tried to discover more on the internet, I got nothing. I would appreciate it if you could elaborate on the project a little more like when the construction work will commence, and when can we expect to go shopping in the mall.

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, who will inaugurate

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new building in our area? We are requesting all

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information because we are getting so excited to spend our leisure time over there. I look forward to receiving your response soon. Regards Sandeep Kaur

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

224 words

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Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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