Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing

this

letter to express my excitement and to inquire about details about the upcoming shopping centre mall in the Heartland area of Mississauga. Actually, I have been living in

this

area for the

last

5 years and I got excited when I saw a commercial advertisement on social media about the construction of a new shopping centre building by Singh builders in 2024. My neighbours and I are extremely excited and delighted about

this

new facility within an easy walk from our residents. We tend to go shopping in the Square one mall which is at a remote location from our accommodation and I am sure

this

new project will definitely make our life not only more convenient but

also

more enjoyable.

However

, the commercial that I came across had only limited information. Even though I tried to discover more on the internet, I got nothing. I would appreciate it if you could elaborate on the project a little more like when the construction work will commence, and when can we expect to go shopping in the mall.

Moreover

, who will inaugurate

this

new building in our area? We are requesting all

this

information because we are getting so excited to spend our leisure time over there. I look forward to receiving your response soon. Regards Sandeep Kaur

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Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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The Government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead .To what extent do you agree with the statements?

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?