Discuss advantages and disadvantages of owning car

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that
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the
car
is undoubtedly one of
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greatest humankind's inventions . Some
people
inextricably depend on it and think that
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cars
are an essential part of their everyday life. One of the greatest advantages of
cars
is certainly their mobility.
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cars
,
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, are the best vehicles
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almost all kinds of journeys.If
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own
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a
car
, I can
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to
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where I
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.Especially is that driving my own
car
makes me happy.Nowadays, almost all
of
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people
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have their own
car
.From my point of view, almost all
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people
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walking
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electric
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car
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in arrival 2030.
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nowadays technology is developing
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extremely
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.
On the other hand
, in the first place, from my point of view
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against
of
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owning
car
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is that accident.
Also
, the
people
who own a
car
are always worried about their
cars
being stolen and damaged.
In addition
to
this
, the amount of
cars
is rising dramatically and it will cause air pollution increasing that, so aftereffects all
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kinds
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of human diseases. All in all, I personally believe that
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the advantages of owning
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is
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good.
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distances can be nearness by owning
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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